""Official photos from Toke Makinwa's book launch"" on www.lindaikejisblog.com Here are my comments: Really nice.
But I don't understand - is the book about Maje?
What he did to her and did not do to her?
I don't really get the book excerpts, like Linda Ikeji has published.
In her next book, she should talk more of herself. I call her a successful vlogger.
Toke, 'biko' in your next book, talk about your travels, fashion, people you have interviewed, people that have supported you like Freeze the OAP personality in Nigeria, your red carpet moments, when you had a misunderstanding with Linda Ikeji working as an OAP and how the misunderstanding was resolved, how you dealt with negative criticisms when you started off vlogging - and you were called a British wanna be and other names.
I want to hear your Toke Makinwa voice in your next book, and not Maje Ayida's voice in your next book.
Congratulations, though.
Here are my comments:
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| HEALTHY LIVING STILL A SIZE 10 EVEN AFTER THREE CHILDREN |
why the caption, “still a size 10 even after three children”? why not leave that space blank.
and maybe write “still a size 10 even after three children” in foreword of her published book.
on the cover of her book, why not use a full length of the picture, not a selfie.
she is a fitness fanatic / expert, people should see the whole packaging, from head to toes.
she can hold dumbbells, on each hand.
her face should look at the camera, connecting with her audience that are her readers, I am talking about the cover of her published book.
I hope she doesn’t have Facebook Twitter YouTube on how one can get in touch with her on the cover of her published book.
The “HEALTHY LIVING” capital letters, why not do it like a cursor.
It is your first time, just my constructive criticisms.
Congratulations on your published book.
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